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A State Ranker’s Guide to Writing 20/20 English Advanced Essays
Essays can be tough. Like, really tough.They’re made tougher still because...
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1. Introduction to this Guide
Essays can be tough. Like, really tough.
They’re made tougher still because every HSC English module has a different essay structure, and no-one seems to have a consistent idea of what an ‘ essay’ actually is (not to get postmodern on you!).
My name is Marko Beocanin, and I’m an English teacher at Project Academy. In this post I hope to demystify essay-writing and arm you with a “tried and proven” approach you can apply to any essay you’ll write in HSC English and beyond. In 2019, I completed all four units of English (Extension 2, Extension 1, and Advanced), and state ranked 8th in NSW for English Advanced and attained a 99.95 ATAR – so take it from me, I’ve written a lot of essays! Here’s some of the advice I’ve picked up throughout that experience.
2. My Essay-Writing Methodology
For us to understand how to write an essay, it’s important to appreciate what an essay (in particular, a HSC English essay) actually is. I’ve come to appreciate the following definition:
An essay is a structured piece of writing that argues a point in a clear, sophisticated way , and expresses personality and flair.
Let’s have a look at each of these keywords – and how they should inform our essay-writing process – in more detail.
3. “Arguing a point” means CAUSE and EFFECT
When most people study English, they tend to make huge lists of Themes, Values, Concerns, Quotes and so on. While this is a great exercise for collecting evidence and understanding your texts, it’s important to remember that your essay is not simply a theme summary or quote bank – you have to actually argue something!
And any argument needs a cause and an effect.
When you approach any essay question, it’s not enough to simply chuck in quotes/topic-sentences that abstractly relate to it. An internal checklist you could go through while reading a question might look like:
- What is the question actually asking me?
- What is my response to the question?
- Am I actually making an argument in my response, and not just repeating the question?
- What is my cause?
- What is my effect?
- How can I prove my argument?
It’s only at question 4 that quotes/analysis/topic-sentences appear. Your first step in writing any essay is to actually have an argument to prove.
Cause and Effect in Thesis Statements
To demonstrate what I mean by cause-and-effect, let’s have a look at a lower-band essay thesis on Nineteen Eighty-Four:
In Nineteen Eighty-Four, George Orwell explores totalitarianism.
This sentence is a flat declaration of a theme. While it does identify totalitarianism, it doesn’t give any indication on what parts of totalitarianism Orwell explores, and what the actual effect of totalitarianism is.
In Nineteen Eighty-Four, George Orwell explores the abuse of power in totalitarian regimes.
This one is certainly better, because it describes a specific element of totalitarianism that Orwell explores – but it’s still missing an actual argument about what totalitarianism DOES to people. A full cause and effect (and higher band) thesis statement might look like:
In Nineteen Eighty-Four, George Orwell explores how the abuse of power in totalitarian regimes leads to a brutalised human experience.
This thesis explicitly outlines how the CAUSE (abuse of power in totalitarian regimes) leads to the EFFECT (a brutalised human experience).
There’s certainly still some ambiguity in this sentence – for example, what sort of human experiences are being brutalised? – and in an exam, you’d substitute that for the specific human experiences outlined in the question.
In general, whenever you see sentences like “Composer X discusses Theme Y” in your essay drafts, think about developing them into “Composer X discusses how Specific Cause of Theme Y leads to Specific Effect of Theme Y”.
Cause and Effect Diagrams
To make sure that your arguments actually have a specific cause and effect , try writing them out in the following diagrammatic way:
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Surprisingly, drawing the arrow made a huge psychological difference for me!
If you struggle with this, try to restructure/rephrase your arguments until they can be categorised in such a way. Making and rewriting these diagrams is also a great way to prep for exams without writing out your whole essay.
Cause and Effect in Analysis
Similarly, when it comes to your actual analysis itself, make sure that you’re not just listing techniques and quotes. You’re not just analysing your quotes for the sake of naming the techniques in them – you’re analysing them to prove a point!
Whenever you consider a quote for your essay, ask yourself:
- What is this quote about?
- How does this quote prove my argument?
- How do the literary techniques in this quote prove my argument?
Let’s use an example from King Henry IV, Part 1 to illustrate this. A lower band piece of analysis might look like:
King Henry’s opening monologue employs anthropomorphism: “Daub her lips with her own children’s blood…bruise her flow’rets with…armed hoofs.”
While the technique of anthropomorphism is identified, this sentence doesn’t link to any argument about WHY that technique is there and what it does.
King Henry’s opening monologue anthropomorphises England as a mother violated by war: “Daub her lips with her own children’s blood…bruise her flow’rets with…armed hoofs.”
This is certainly better, because it explains what the technique actually does – but it still doesn’t discuss how the technique guides us to an actual point.
King Henry’s opening monologue anthropomorphises England as a mother violated by war: “Daub her lips with her own children’s blood…bruise her flow’rets with…armed hoofs…” to convey the civil unrest caused by his tenuous claim to the throne.
This analysis not only outlines the technique in detail, but it also explicitly embeds it with an argument – this time, structured as EFFECT ( civil unrest ) caused by CAUSE ( his tenuous claim to the throne ).
In general, whenever you see analysis in your drafts written as “Composer X uses Technique Y in Quote Z”, try to rewrite it as “Composer X uses Technique Y in Quote Z to argue Point A”.
4. Clear, Sophisticated Way
In general, clarity/sophistication in Advanced essays comes from two main sources.
4.1 Essay Structure
For most essays, the simplest and most effective overall structure looks like:
- Intro: Here, you answer the question with an argument, summarise your points and link to the rubric.
- 3 – 4 Body Paragraphs: Here, you actually make your points.
- Conclusion: Here, you re-summarise your arguments and ‘drop the mic’.
While it’s cool to play around with the number of body paragraphs, for example, the structure above is generally a safe bet for Advanced.
The most variety comes from the actual structure within your body paragraphs.
There are plenty of online guides/resources with fun acronyms like STEEL and PEETAL and less fun ones like PEEQTET – but ultimately, the exact formula you go with is a relatively inconsequential matter of choice and style. Just make sure you have the following elements roughly in this order!
4.2 Cause and Effect Topic Sentence
Here, you make your point as clearly as possible (remember cause and effect), and address the specific argument that the paragraph will cover. It’s fantastic if you can link this argument to the argument in your previous paragraph.
4.3 Context Sentence
This bit is vital (and often forgotten!). Texts don’t exist in a void – their composers had lives, were influenced by the world around them, and had inspirations and purposes in their compositions. Context can be political, socio-cultural, religious, philosophical, literary etc… as long as it’s there!
4.4 Cause and Effect Analysis
In a three-paragraph structure, a solid aim is for four to five quotes per paragraph. Each point you make should be justified with a quote, and each quote should have a technique linked to it. It’s usually helpful to order your quotes chronologically as they appear within the text (to show how the argument progressively builds) – but in more non-linear forms like poetry, for example, you can switch it up a little. Make sure each paragraph covers quotes from the whole text, to demonstrate a broad range of analysis!
Here, you might give a restatement of your topic sentence that summarises your main ideas.
Wording and Expression
A common misconception with English Advanced is that huge words and long, meandering sentences will score the most marks.
In Advanced, clarity should come from your expression , while sophistication should come from your ideas . Ultimately, the more complex your expression and sentence structure is, the more your markers will have to work to connect with your content.
While an occasional well-executed piece of technical jargon is impressive, it should never come at the cost of clearly and explicitly getting your point across.
A few general tips I’ve picked up from both my time as a student and my work as a tutor include:
- Avoid using a thesaurus/online synonym-search whenever possible! If you didn’t consider using a word naturally, it’s unlikely it will flow with the rest of your expression.
- A long, comma-intensive sentence can (and should) almost always be replaced with two or more sentences.
- Use semicolons sparingly (if at all), and with GREAT caution.
- Never underestimate words like “because”, “leads to”, “causes” etc. They are simple, but brilliantly effective at establishing a clear cause and effect structure!
- Make sure to continuously reuse words from the question. Even if this feels clunky, it helps you actually engage with the question.
- Also make sure to continuously use rubric keywords – particularly in Common Mod and Mod A!
5. Personality and Flair
And now… the hardest bit. Putting a bit of you into your essays.
There’s no one way to “add personality/flair” – this is where you have the freedom to develop your own voice and style. Remember that your markers love literature – and for them to see real, unadulterated enthusiasm in your work is an absolute win that will be marked generously.
To develop that passionate flair/personality, I encourage you to do three things:Practice. A Lot. The more you write – whether it’s homework questions, mini paragraphs, or flat-out full practice essays – the better you’ll become at writing. It’s as simple as that.
6. Concluding Remarks
Get feedback on your work.
To make sure you’re actually improving with your writing, aim to get plenty of feedback from both of these groups:
- People who know your text and HSC English in-and-out (teachers, tutors, scholars etc.), so they can engage with your analysis and help develop your style/structure.
- People who don’t know your texts and HSC English particularly well (parents, friends, etc.), so they can check your arguments actually make sense!
Explore your own English-related interests.
Reading widely and writing weird stuff just for fun adds an indescribable but very real level of depth and nuance to your essay-writing. For me, this involved immersing myself in crazy literary theory that had nothing to with my texts, and writing super edgy poetry. Find what works for you!
Good Luck!!!
Whether this article reaches you the night before Paper 1, or at the start of your English journey – I’m confident that you can do this. If you can find even one thing that you connect with about this subject… whether it’s a character you love, or a beautiful poem, or a wacky critical piece that’s totally BS… hopefully you’ll realise that essay writing doesn’t have to be so tough after all!
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HSC Standard English: The Ultimate Guide to Getting That Band 6!
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HSC Standard English.
Because English is the only subject ALL students have to take for the HSC, it can pose a major challenge.
Some students are naturally good at English, some just don’t like it, some feel like they’re just plain bad at it.
Whatever category you fall into, we can help!
In this article we’ve got you covered with a step-by-step Guide to Acing HSC Standard English!
Let’s jump in!
Part 1: Developing Essential English Skills Part 2: Common Module Part 3: Module A Part 4: Module B Part 5: Module C
Part 1: Developing Essential English Skills
Before we can dive into the HSC Standard English modules, it’s important you have a strong foundation when it comes to writing an essay and analysing your texts.
How to Write a Band 6 HSC English Essay
When writing an essay, it’s important you know how to develop a strong argument that is supported by the best possible pieces of evidence with great analysis, all supported in a strong structure.
Obviously, this is much easier said than done! Although, that’s why we’ve created a guide to writing a Band 6 essay in HSC English that you can find below!
If you want to brush up on your thesis writing skills, that is, crafting a unique argument to any question, you may want to check out the article below:
How to Construct a Strong Thesis Statement in Your HSC English Essay
How to Analyse Your Text
The next key step is developing your analytical skills! This is pivotal as analysis will underpin anything and everything you write in English, from short answer responses in Paper 1 to your essays in Paper 2.
To have strong analytical skills, you need to be able to identify key ideas in a text and elaborate upon these, whilst finding literary techniques that will add meaning to your analysis.
For a recap on how to achieve this, you can check out our article to analysing texts like a pro below!
How to Quickly and Flawlessly Analyse HSC English Texts
Knowing Your Literary and Visual Techniques
The last step to building up your set of English skills is being able to identify literary and visual techniques.
You’ll find these in any text you study, including novels, poems, films, prose and even art!
For a quick brush-up on these devices, you can take a look at our mast list of literary and visual techniques:
The Ultimate HSC English Literary Techniques Cheat Sheet
For visual techniques, check out our master list below!
The Complete HSC English Visual Techniques Cheat Sheet
Now that you’ve nailed those essential English skills, we can dive into breaking down each of the Standard English modules!
Part 2: The Guide to the Common Module: Texts and Human Experiences
Texts and Human Experiences is a common module for HSC Standard and Advanced, meaning EVERYONE has to take it!
It will likely be the first topic you study for HSC Standard English, but hopefully not the hardest one.
The Common Module is notably vague in its rubric so it’s important to be able to pin it down. Human experiences can encompass anything experienced by a human – huge, right?
Take a look at the Texts and Human Experiences rubric statement (we’ve highlighted some key parts to help you out!):
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That’s why we’ve put together the ultimate guide on what Texts and Human Experience is all about and how to ace it!
We cover what the module is all about, what you’ll study and be assessed on and how to write for Texts and Human Experiences.
In short, everything you need to know to ace the Common Module for Standard English!
Read our in-depth article on all things HSC Standard English module Texts and Human Experience here:
The Step-by-Step Guide to the Common Module: Texts and Human Experience for HSC Standard English
Once you’ve read our guide and are ready to start some practice essays (and understand the key verbs ), you can check out 20 of our essay questions on the Common Module here:
20 Practice Questions for HSC English Common Module: Texts and Human Experiences
Related Texts
For Texts and Human Experiences, you’ll be studying a prescribed text , and also will need to find a related text!
But what exactly is a related text? Why do you need one and how do you possibly find one?!
A related text (as it sounds) is a text that is related to the concept of Texts and Human Experiences AND your prescribed text for the Standard English Common Module.
But actually finding a good related text is an art that many HSC Standard English students have not mastered…
It’s not as easy as picking your favourite film or book… in fact this is exactly the opposite of what you should do!
That’s why we’ve done the hard work for you and compiled our Top 5 Related Texts for the HSC Standard English Common Module: Texts and Human Experiences!
Check out our Top Five Recommended Related Texts for Texts and Human Experiences here:
Our Top 5 Recommended Related Texts for the HSC Standard English Common Module: Texts and Human Experiences
If you’re struggling to analyse your related text on your own, you can find our 3 step guide to analysing any related text here:
How to Quickly* and Flawlessly Analyse HSC English Texts
Part 3: The Guide to Module A: Language, Identity and Culture
Now that you’re sorted for the Common Module, let’s move on to HSC Standard English Module A!
So, what does Language, Identity and Culture even mean?
The module is built on the relationship between who people are, what group of people they come from, and how this is reflected through language.
Let’s take a look at the rubric!
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This can be a difficult concept to wrap your head around, and that’s why we’ve covered everything you need to know in our Guide to Module A for HSC Standard English!
In this article , we cover what the Module is all about, what you’ll be assessed on and how to get a Band 6, check it out here:
How to Get a Band 6 in HSC Standard English Module A: Language, Identity and Culture
Module A Practice Questions
As this is a new syllabus, you most likely won’t be able to find practice questions to complete.
Luckily we’ve created 20 practice questions for HSC Standard English Module A for you to use below:
20 Practice Questions for HSC Standard English Module A: Language, Identity and Culture
Part 4: The Guide to Module B: Close Study of Literature
How do you closely study a piece of literature?
And how can that make up an ENTIRE HSC Standard English module?
In Module B you need to be able to develop personal and intellectual connection to your text and be able to write both a critical and creative response to that text.
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This is basically a complicated way of saying you need to actually read and develop an appreciation to your text. Watching the movie and reading the SparkNotes is not enough to do well in Module B!
You also need to be able to write both a critical response (or essay) and creative response related to your prescribed text.
But actually doing these things are easier said than done.
In this awesome article, we’ll take you through exactly what’s expected of you for HSC Standard English Module B, and how to ace it!
Check it out here:
The Ultimate Guide to HSC Standard English Module B: Close Study of Literature
Module B Practice Questions
We’ve also created 20 questions for you to choose from to write a Module B practice essay, which you can find here:
20 Practice Questions for HSC Standard English Module B: Close Study of Literature
Part 5: The Guide to Module C: The Craft of Writing
The new HSC Standard English Module C is a frightening prospect for most students.
The new Module C covers how to write, and write well.
While this might not seem like a big deal for you, or you’re not sure if you’ll even use the skills you learn in this Module in the ‘real world’, but writing is going to be an important skill no matter what career path you choose to walk down.
So, let’s take a look at the rubric!
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Module C teaches you how to write effectively using many different text types, including: imaginative, discursive, persuasive and informative texts – there’s a lot to learn and it can feel overwhelming.
That’s why in the article below we run you through exactly what you need to know about Module C, so you can ace it and get that Band 6!
The Step-by-Step Guide to HSC English Module C: The Craft of Writing
Discursive Writing
As Module C is all about writing in different forms of texts, a new text type has been introduced to this module, called discursive writing.
NESA defines discursive writing as, “ Texts whose primary focus is to explore an idea or variety of topics. These texts involve the discussion of an idea(s) or opinion(s) without the direct intention of persuading the reader, listener or viewer to adopt any single point of view”
Such examples of discursive writing can be creative non-fiction, travel blogs, discussion essays, speeches and personal essays, amongst others.
It can be daunting to try new text types, but you don’t have to do it alone! We’ve created the ultimate guide to breaking down the basics of discursive writing and how to achieve a Band 6 worthy discursive writing piece here:
How to Write a Band 6 Discursive Writing Piece for HSC English Module C
Module C Practice Questions
If you’re feeling ready to start some writing practice, you can check out a list of 20 questions we’ve created for Module C here:
20 Practice Questions for HSC English Module C: The Craft of Writing
Reflective Statement
If you checked out our practice questions for Module C above, you might have noticed that some questions have a Part A and Part B, where Part A consists of your written piece and Part B requires a reflection.
This reflection is called a ‘reflective statement’ and is a completely new part of HSC English that assesses how your creative decisions in your pieces were drawn from your prescribed text.
If you need a hand nailing your reflective statement, you can check out our guide on how to write one here:
How to Write a Reflective Statement For Module C: Craft of Writing
And that wraps up our guide to HSC Standard English and its modules! Good luck!
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Essay Writing 101 Lesson #1 - Accurate Words
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Welcome to Essay Writing 101, brought to you by Anqi.
This post marks the beginning to a series of short blog lessons specifically created to help Australian high school students in preparing for HSC English. However, it will be helpful for anyone looking to start English literary essay writing.
Why do we write essays?
Put simply, essays are a formal expression of your thoughts . It's has the same function as when you have a chat with your friend to tell them your opinions, only that an essay is super formal and you have to communicate your ideas clearly in one large lump (because the reader cannot ask you questions while they read to clarify your ideas). Due to this need for clarity, accuracy is crucial in essay writing.
Aim for accurate, not for complex.
Have you ever been in the middle of a miscommunication? Maybe one of your friends misunderstood what you meant by a certain word or sentence over text or Instagram. Maybe you texted 'k.' which to you meant "ok sure" but to them it meant "I hate you".
The key to all effective communication is accuracy . As the communicator it's your responsibility to share information in a way that is clear and reflects your thoughts closely. As I write this blog, I must take on the responsibility of sharing ideas with you in a way that doesn't make you feel:
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From as early as you can remember, teachers have encouraged the use of "bigger" or "better" words because it "makes your writing better". An incorrect connection between "bigger words" and "more accurate words" is formed. Using more sophisticated-sounding words may have worked in primary school when you received full marks for your creative writing because you wrote 'vermillion' instead of 'red, but eventually you have to learn that accurate language is not the same as complex language .
Take the following example:
I used the printer yesterday.
I utilised the printer yesterday.
'Utilised' is arguably the more complex word. It has more letters, it sounds fancier, and it's in the thesaurus as a replacement for boring old 'use'. However, 'use' is the more accurate word.
Utilise means 'to make practical and effective use of', meaning that efficiency must be present if you choose this word. If there's no reference to efficiency, you sound like you're choosing 'utilise' for the sake of sounding smart (yes, teachers can tell).
A more accurate use of utilise is:
The instructions manual helped me utilise the printer to its full potential.
The bottom line is: complex words do not make for accurate writing.
Why do teachers hate the word 'show' then?
Teachers hate 'show' and want you to use 'highlight' or 'illustrate' instead. How can I explain this if complex vocabulary is not important? That's because 'show' is not hated for its simplicity, it's hated for its lack of clarity.
The word 'show' is vague. Vague means that something can be interpreted in many different ways.
If I was asked: "Where are you going?"
And I say: "Out."
My answer is vague , because 'out' can mean:
to the shops
to join the Yakuza
Luckily, the asker can ask me: "To join the Yakuza?" and I can proceed to assure them of the impossibility with my inability to strategise a simple hoax let alone a complicated heist. But a reader can't clarify the meaning with you, so you must avoid vagueness so you don't force them to guess what you mean.
In the same line of logic, 'show' tends to be vague because it could mean:
show angrily (condemn)
show to make you do something (promote)
show to support a cause (advocate)
show to make you change your ideas (challenge)
show as an example (illustrate)
Therefore it is important when writing essays to use specific verbs dense in meaning .
Ok, but I don't know which verb to use - help!
The Strategic Alternative Learning Techniques Centre of Arizona (bless them) has been a pillar of support for me and my students in times of dire need. They have compiled the Grandpapa of all essay verb lists which you can refer to at the following link:
https://salt.arizona.edu/sites/salt.arizona.edu/files/tutoringfiles/handouts/Powerful%20Verbs%20for%20Essays.pdf
Use this list as a starting point but do not mindlessly swap out 'show' with the words on this list. Make friends with a dictionary. Figure out the differences between each word and use them accurately .
And that's a wrap for lesson 1!
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Why students struggle with essay writing.
Effective essay writing has been on the decline for the past fifteen years in schools. Students struggle with their interpretation of questions, the harnessing of powerful evidence and structure and expression.
As schools and teachers are increasingly time poor, essay writing is left until students have major assessment tasks and trial examinations thrust upon them. It is my experience that many students in senior years scramble to incorporate teachers notes which appear on the white board, and are simply copied and pasted without any real consideration as to whether
- The notes make sense
- Whether they reflect the thinking process of the student.
The other major issue is the kind of feedback being provided. Comments such as your expression is poor, or you haven’t answered the question or pay more attention to techniques are too abstract for students to really comprehend.
Pre -written essays drafted by tutors.
Again, the presumption that a student can incorporate a tutor’s perspective and adapt their set essay to an unseen examination question is highly problematic. Firstly, the information and interpretation of the set text does not belong to the student it belongs to the tutor. Secondly, the examination questions set rarely correspond to the pre- written question. Students struggle to interpret the question and then they have the arduous task of integrating their own response, the tutor’s response and finally their own.
Incomplete study of the set text.
In recent years there has been a tendency on the part of students sitting their HSC to really only familiarise themselves with passages drawn from the set literary text which are selected by the teachers without a keen understanding on the students part as to why, what and how these passages convey the ideas embedded in their texts. Shakespeare’s works and significantly complex novels remain unanalysed barring some selected passages, leaving students with a superficial understanding of the depth of ideas and the possibility of exploiting other parts of the text.
The approach to structured responses.
The schools have attempted in recent years to introduce steps in the structuring of paragraphs such as PEAL : . Point, elaboration, example, link.
This approach helps in terms of superficially eliciting a seemingly structured paragraph response, but it does not help students determine what their point should be. What example to source and in fact how to elaborate on the example?
I have noted that when it comes elaborating on examples students are at a loss as to how to elaborate as they fall into the habit of explaining the evidence rather than analysing the nature of the example. A simple application of the question why and what the composer has chosen as his or her particular style of language eg : choice of words, imagery , or tone will enable students to navigate the impact of such language and incorporate this in their response.
Techniques in text
A large part of writing essays is underscored by NESA’s requirement that students are able to understand that literary texts convey meaning- that identifying a technique such as a metaphor or simile does not exploit sufficiently why a writer may have selected this kind of literary device. Students need to understand why a writer has used this type of language; what it implies about the values and or attitude of the writer or character in the text. Language cannot be viewed in a vacuum or students run the risk of not understanding how language contributes to the intended meaning and interpretation of texts.
How many paragraphs
It seems absurd that students ponder how many paragraphs they should write in an essay and that the number of paragraphs is dependent upon an arbitrary perception on the part of educators. I have students ask me how many paragraphs they should write, or their teacher says they should write three paragraphs. The fundamental understanding of what a paragraph is seems to have been lost. No one can know how many paragraphs may be needed to produce a strong essay response. Such oversimplified and ill-thought instructions prejudice clarity of writing and prejudice the depth of essay response.
Note taking on texts.
Many students fail to annotate their texts; as such their notes are often in their note- books as they scramble to interpret fragmented notes and incomplete quotes into the body of their essay. The students, assuming they’ve read the texts, struggle to make sense of notes which are displaced and out of context.
Understanding the essay question.
Without an in depth understanding of the text it is impossible to directly answer an essay question. Students have to ask the following questions:
What is the question asking, how does it relate to the ideas in their text and what are the assumptions or ideas implied on the part of the examiner that have inspired such a question.
The job of the essay writer is to convince the examiner by way of structure and evidence that their approach is well thought out and explains their interpretation of the question and that their ideas are substantiated in the essay.
Introductions
A fundamental failure in understanding essay writing lies in the composition of introductions. Students often fail to understand the question at hand and if they do, they need to set down their responses in such a way that they are advancing their own thesis and of course how and why they have adopted such a response.
An introduction is fundamentally a personal orientation and thought- out approach to an essay question. In my opinion it is the backbone of the structure to an essay and requires much planning and research before pen is put to paper.
Body of the essay
The body of the essay must support the thesis set down in the introduction. Each paragraph should correspond clearly to each idea set forth in the introduction acknowledging how what and why they have sited the evidence that they have chosen. Remember though,
if the introduction is not composed with depth and doesn’t directly answer the question, then the student is unable to link back to their thesis. Many students are unable to realise that the body of their essay should reflect the thesis established in their introduction.
Citing evidence.
Way before the essay commences students should have gathered quotations systematically and placed it under corresponding themes or ideas. Failure to do so will result in quotations and evidence which is irrelevant to the idea advanced. It is important to note that the analysis of evidence forms much of the content of the essay and what makes one essay stand out from another is the physical sourcing of quotes which display depth of thought and convince and support one’s thesis.
Structured powerful responses.
These lie in the ability of a student to not only offer well thought-out responses and evidence but what is also essential is that students link back to the question and opening thesis of the body paragraph, physically guiding and convincing the examiner that their response is logical and offers powerful insight on the ideas of the text.
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Composition writing is the process of creating written works such as essays, stories, and other types of texts. It requires the writer to organize their thoughts and ideas in a clear and coherent manner, and to express themselves using appropriate language and grammar. I have written all important compositions for all classes students including class 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, ssc and hsc examination. I have given the list of 100% common and important compositions for upcoming HSC examination. Composition is a short piece of writing done as a school exercise. The definition of composition is the act of putting something together, or the combination of elements or qualities. To read the compositing, just click on the name of the composition . All the compositions are very readable and very easy to learn.
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- Modern Technology and Globalization
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- Understand the prompt: Before you start writing, make sure you understand the prompt or topic of the composition. Take the time to read it carefully and think about what you are being asked to write about.
- Plan your composition: Before you start writing, take a few minutes to plan your composition. This can include brainstorming ideas, outlining your main points, and organizing your thoughts in a logical order.
- Use descriptive language: Use descriptive language and imagery to create a sense of setting and atmosphere in your composition. This can help to engage the reader and make your writing more interesting.
- Use transitions: Use transitional words and phrases to connect your ideas and make your composition flow smoothly. This can help to improve the coherence and cohesiveness of your writing.
- Edit and revise: Once you have finished writing your composition, take the time to edit and revise it. This can include checking for spelling and grammar errors, as well as making sure that your ideas are clearly expressed and that your composition is well-organized.
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- Practice: Practice writing compositions regularly, focusing on different types of writing and different prompts. This can help to improve your writing skills and make you more confident when it comes to taking exams.
- Read widely: Reading widely will help to expose you to different styles of writing, vocabulary, and structures, which will in turn help you in your composition writing.
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- A Tea Stall Paragraph
- A Village Doctor Paragraph
- A Village Fair Paragraph
- A Winter Morning Paragraph
- Adolescence Paragraph
- An Ideal Student Paragraph
- Auto Paragraph
- Bangabandhu Satellite Paragraph
- Child Labour Paragraph
- Climate Change Paragraph
- Copying in the examination paragraph
- CoronaVirus Paragraph
- Corruption Paragraph
- Danger of smoking paragraph
- Deforestation Paragraph
- Dengue Fever Paragraph
- Diaspora Paragraph
- Discipline Paragraph
- Dowry System Paragraph
- Drug Addiction Paragraph
- Early Marriage Paragraph
- Effect of Television Paragraph
- Environment Pollution Paragraph
- Etiquette and Manner Paragraph
- Female Education Paragraph
- FIFA World Cup 2022 Paragraph
- Folk Music Paragraph
- Gender Discrimination Paragraph
- Global Warming Paragraph
- Globalization Paragraph
- Good Health Paragraph
- Green House Effect Paragraph
- Higher Education in Bangladesh Paragraph
- Historic 7th March Speech Paragraph
- HSC 2023 Paragraph suggestion
- Human Rights Paragraph
- Importance of Learning English Paragraph
- Important Paragraph for HSC
- International Mother Language Day Paragraph
- Load-shedding Paragraph
- Lockdown Paragraph
- Metro Rail Paragraph
- Mobile Phone Paragraph
- Modern Technology Paragraph
- Mujib Year / Mujib Borsho Paragraph
- My Best Friend Paragraph
- Newspaper Paragraph
- Our Country Bangladesh Paragraph
- Padma Bridge Paragraph
- Pahela Baishakh Paragraph
- Peace And Conflict Paragraph
- Peace Movement Paragraph
- Physical Exercise Paragraph
- Population problem paragraph
- Price Hike Paragraph
- Road Accident Paragraph
- Rohingya Crisis Paragraph
- Sound Pollution Paragraph
- SSC important Paragraph
- Street Children Paragraph
- Superstition Paragraph
- Terrorism in the campus paragraph
- Terrorism Paragraph
- The 21st February Paragraph
- The Importance of Learning English Paragraph
- The Life of a Farmer Paragraph
- Tree Plantation Paragraph
- Victory Day Paragraph
- An email to your friend describing how to use internet
- Email to Your Friend Condoling at His Father’s Sudden Death
- Write an email inviting your friend to come to visit the Sundarbans
- Write an email to your father about your progress in studies and preparation for the exam
- Write an email to your father describing your exam
- Write an email to your father informing him of your result that has been published recently
- Write an email to your foreign friend telling him about beauty of Bangladesh
- Write an email to your friend about the duties and responsibilities of a good citizen
- Write an email to your friend about the experience of visiting the Shat Gambuj Mosque
- Write an email to your friend about the importance of games and sports
- Write an email to your friend about your experience of a train journey
- Write an email to your friend congratulating him for his good performance in a cricket match
- Write an email to your friend congratulating him/her on his/her brilliant success
- Write an email to your friend describing a historical place
- Write an email to your friend describing about your country and its natural beauty
- Write an email to your friend describing the co-curricular activities of your college
- Write an email to your friend describing the prize giving ceremony of your college
- Write An Email To Your Friend Describing Your Native Village
- Write an email to your friend greeting him/her happy new year
- Write an email to your friend inviting him to attend the wedding ceremony of your elder brother/ sister
- Write an email to your friend inviting him to spend the summer vacation with you in your village home
- Write an email to your friend narrating the sufferings of the flood affected people
- Write an email to your friend telling him about taking food in a Chinese restaurant
- Write an email to your friend telling him about your recent visit to Paharpur
- Write an email to your friend telling him/her about the benefits of reading newspaper
- Write an email to your friend thanking him whose home you have visited recently
- Write an email to your mother about how you physically feel after recovery from an ailment
- Write an email to your pen friend asking him/her to visit Bangladesh
- Write an email to your pen friend informing him about the experience of visiting a book fair
- Write an email to your younger brother about the importance of learning English
- Write an email to your younger brother advising him not to adopt unfair means in the examination
- Write an email to your younger brother advising him to be regular in studies
- Write an email to your younger brother describing him the importance of ICT knowledge
- Write an email to your younger brother describing the importance of physical exercise
Informal Letter
- Write a letter about your preparation for the coming SSC exam
- Write a letter describing how you have celebrated the Pohela Boishakh
- Write a letter describing the importance of physical exercise
- Write a letter of sympathy to your sick friend in hospital
- Write a letter on how to improve proficiency in English
- Write a letter to pen friend about food and food habit of Bangladesh
- Write a letter to your father informing him of your mother’s illness
- Write a letter to your friend about the annual prize giving ceremony of your school
- Write a letter to your friend about your aim in life
- Write a letter to your friend condoling him on his father’s death
- Write a letter to your friend congratulating him on his brilliant result
- Write a letter to your friend consoling him at his failure in the SSC examination
- Write a letter to your friend describing the accident you have witnessed
- Write a letter to your friend describing the bad effect of smoking
- Write a letter to your friend discussing the importance of learning English
- Write a letter to your friend inviting him to join the picnic
- Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to spend a few days with during the summer vacation
- Write a letter to your friend telling him about the importance of reading newspaper
- Write a letter to your friend telling him how you have spent the summer vacation
- Write a letter to your friend thanking him for a birthday gift
- Write a letter to your younger brother advising him to be sincere and attentive to his study
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18 Study Tools Every HSC Student Should Know About
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Welcome to our monthly roundup of undisputed favourite study tools which are worth adding to your toolbelt as soon as possible. From free access to past written works to a virtual campus, these are the HSC resources that are available that have been highly recommended by the AceHSC team and they can’t stop talking about it.
We know how hard it can be to transition from studying from home to back at school and we are here to help. If you are feeling overwhelmed with HSC study and exam prep and you just don’t know where to start, this guide may be just what you need.
This guide has 7 categories of different resources that you might find useful and helpful throughout your HSC journey and for your exam preparation.
Type of Online Tools
- All-Rounder study tools
All about that Quizzes
Productivity tools, improve your writing skills, yay math said no one ever.
- For visual learners
Need Extra Challenge?
The all-rounder.
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AceHSC has all the free resources and tools that you need to survive high school and its challenges. If you are new to our community, we strongly recommend you start from browsing our Study Resources site. We all know how important past exam questions and solid study notes are for exam success, so we collected a massive library of past works to help you ace your HSC journey. Whether or not you have your study notes prepared , our Quizzes and Articles are very popular amongst the students. Quizzes are a very powerful tool when it comes to revision and closing your knowledge gap, our articles are also there to guide and motivate your HSC study journey. We have currently launched our friendly HSC forum community and video library to help you study better. Sign up for our mailing list to get notified when our new features are live!
Khan Academy
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Khan Academy has a library dedicated for all levels of learners and teachers. This platform is a highly useful source of academic learning and is especially useful for students who prefer to study at their own pace.
Unlike learning from YouTube videos, you can look for videos for demonstrations on how to solve each problem correctly. In case you didn’t know, Khan Academy is free for everyone.
Art of Smart Resources
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Whether you are looking for a 1 on 1 tutor or a mentor, you can’t go wrong with Art of Smart . They offer a free range of study guides, articles, practice questions and papers especially tailored for students.
For the most part, offering range of tutoring classes and skill-building workshops for Year 7 to 12 students. If you prefer to have guidance and support tailored to your own personal goals, you should totally check out Art of Smart’s mentor program.
HSC CoWorks Resources
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If you are on a hunt to find a virtual campus for extra support for your Year 11 and 12 study journey HSC Coworks is a great resource to explore, HSC Coworks offers face to face programs as well as virtual programs to suit your study needs.
They are also known for its flexible yet structured program for you to achieve your ATAR goal. You may want to discuss with your parents about their fees if you are interested none the less you’re sure to have a sharp advantage in your studies.
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During your study sessions, it is always a good idea to stop and review what you have learned. Repetition is essential to master your learning, and one way to repeat content is through quizzes.
Here we present Quizlet , the ultimate platform that helps you confidently learn and master anything
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Note taking is such an important part of the life for every student. Evernote is one of the highest rated note taking application that allows you to create, organise, and sync your notes across your devices.
What makes it stand out is its web clipping feature where you can capture any useful content from the web and add your own personal notes and drawings on to it. If you are currently using an Evernote-book to boost your productivity, share your tips with us and help your fellow students!
Marinara Timer
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Time management is great in theory – it challenges you to prioritise tasks and execute each effectively – but it is easy said than done.
Marinara Timer is your custom productivity timer that you can tailor to suit your productivity needs. It is specifically designed to improve your workflow by pushing you to complete your tasks within the set period of time.
My Study Life
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No matter if you are an overachiever or an idealist, you need to formulate some form of a system whether in your brain or written down to organise and prioritise your tasks and events. My Study Life is such an underrated tool for both HSC and uni students to schedule every assignment, test, and upcoming deadline.
It may take you a while to discover how My Study Life can benefit you, but we guarantee that your study journey will be much smoother if you stick to it.
Self Control
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If you find yourself scrolling through social media apps mindlessly for hours, Selfcontrol is easily one of the best apps to remove distractions and enable you to focus on your real work.
It is a free app that allows you to block your own access to websites for a pre-set period of time. Unfortunately, Selfcontrol is available for Mac users only but there are plenty of alternatives out there that runs on Windows with similar functionality.
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We have tested most of the grammar software tools out there – and Grammarly is a top-rated product for good reason.
One, Grammarly’s free feature does real-time grammar correction and spell checking for you.
Two, Grammarly doesn’t just tell you what is incorrect, it is programmed to give you detailed explanations so that you can understand and improve on your writing skills.
Three, Grammarly is extremely easy and simple to use – all you have to do is install the plugin on your browser and you are ready to go!
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What to do when you’re stuck on an essay? Look no further because we have what you are looking for – the EssayBot . It is your personal AI writing tool that is designed to give you a nudge to get started or continue on your essay writing.
The most exciting part is that EssayBot now generates standardised MLA & APA citations! The only downside of this tool is that the free trial lasts for 7 days only.
Hemingway App
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For students who are struggling to improve their writing, Hemingway App could be the major gamechanger. This online tool is easy-to-use and extremely interactive – all you have to do is to cut and paste your work into the Hemingway front page and it will proofread your work in real time.
We have been told that students are in love with Hemingway’s readability grade and detailed analytics on how to improve their writing skills
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Did you know that human brains respond to visuals better than text or any other kind of learning material? The fastest and easiest way to learn maths is actually to watch how the experts do it and practice on your own after.
If you are not confident with maths, we highly recommend visiting Eddie Woo’s Youtube channel and binge-watch his fun and informative math lessons. Just like Eddie said, ‘there’s magic in maths – if you know where to look…
RMIT Learning Lab
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Do you find maths and science challenging? Maybe you should give RMIT Learning Lab a try. The Lab has a dedicated section for Year 11 and 12 maths and science study resources.
If you do not have a good foundation for these subjects, the Lab has online videos that explain basic concepts, as well as free tutorial worksheets and booklets to help you study well for your exams.
WolframAlpha
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We get it. Math is not everyone’s favourite subject, yet we cannot escape from it. If you are stuck with a complex math problem and need an answer instantly, Wolfram Alpha would do a much better job as an online problem solver than Google.
All you have to do is type the math problem into the search bar and Wolfram Alpha will solve it in a matter of seconds. You know what they say, seek diligently and ye shall find.
For Visual Learners
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To all the visual learners out there, we get you. If you prefer learning through mind maps, you might already have Popplet in your study toolbelt. This tool is highly interactive and extremely useful for group projects and brainstorming sessions.
What’s great about Popplet is it allows your teammates to collaborate on the platform and you can export your work into PDF or JPEG files.
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We all know that practising with past exam papers is by far the best HSC exam preparation method (even in uni). HSC Ninja has a huge library of HSC practice exam-styled questions for you to step up your HSC exam prep game.
If you would like a sneak peek of your ATAR score estimate based on your HSC marks, you should also check out their HSC ATAR Calculator.
P ascal Press
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Are you looking for home study materials to do extra hours of practice and revision? You should check out Pascal Press .
It is widely known for publishing a broad range of quality educational resources, such as ATAR Notes, Political and Legal Studies books, Vocational Education & Training material and many others that you may need for your studies. Visit their website now so you don’t miss out on their clearance sale.
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Sat / act prep online guides and tips, getting college essay help: important do's and don’ts.
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College Essays
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If you grow up to be a professional writer, everything you write will first go through an editor before being published. This is because the process of writing is really a process of re-writing —of rethinking and reexamining your work, usually with the help of someone else. So what does this mean for your student writing? And in particular, what does it mean for very important, but nonprofessional writing like your college essay? Should you ask your parents to look at your essay? Pay for an essay service?
If you are wondering what kind of help you can, and should, get with your personal statement, you've come to the right place! In this article, I'll talk about what kind of writing help is useful, ethical, and even expected for your college admission essay . I'll also point out who would make a good editor, what the differences between editing and proofreading are, what to expect from a good editor, and how to spot and stay away from a bad one.
Table of Contents
What Kind of Help for Your Essay Can You Get?
What's Good Editing?
What should an editor do for you, what kind of editing should you avoid, proofreading, what's good proofreading, what kind of proofreading should you avoid.
What Do Colleges Think Of You Getting Help With Your Essay?
Who Can/Should Help You?
Advice for editors.
Should You Pay Money For Essay Editing?
The Bottom Line
What's next, what kind of help with your essay can you get.
Rather than talking in general terms about "help," let's first clarify the two different ways that someone else can improve your writing . There is editing, which is the more intensive kind of assistance that you can use throughout the whole process. And then there's proofreading, which is the last step of really polishing your final product.
Let me go into some more detail about editing and proofreading, and then explain how good editors and proofreaders can help you."
Editing is helping the author (in this case, you) go from a rough draft to a finished work . Editing is the process of asking questions about what you're saying, how you're saying it, and how you're organizing your ideas. But not all editing is good editing . In fact, it's very easy for an editor to cross the line from supportive to overbearing and over-involved.
Ability to clarify assignments. A good editor is usually a good writer, and certainly has to be a good reader. For example, in this case, a good editor should make sure you understand the actual essay prompt you're supposed to be answering.
Open-endedness. Good editing is all about asking questions about your ideas and work, but without providing answers. It's about letting you stick to your story and message, and doesn't alter your point of view.
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Think of an editor as a great travel guide. It can show you the many different places your trip could take you. It should explain any parts of the trip that could derail your trip or confuse the traveler. But it never dictates your path, never forces you to go somewhere you don't want to go, and never ignores your interests so that the trip no longer seems like it's your own. So what should good editors do?
Help Brainstorm Topics
Sometimes it's easier to bounce thoughts off of someone else. This doesn't mean that your editor gets to come up with ideas, but they can certainly respond to the various topic options you've come up with. This way, you're less likely to write about the most boring of your ideas, or to write about something that isn't actually important to you.
If you're wondering how to come up with options for your editor to consider, check out our guide to brainstorming topics for your college essay .
Help Revise Your Drafts
Here, your editor can't upset the delicate balance of not intervening too much or too little. It's tricky, but a great way to think about it is to remember: editing is about asking questions, not giving answers .
Revision questions should point out:
- Places where more detail or more description would help the reader connect with your essay
- Places where structure and logic don't flow, losing the reader's attention
- Places where there aren't transitions between paragraphs, confusing the reader
- Moments where your narrative or the arguments you're making are unclear
But pointing to potential problems is not the same as actually rewriting—editors let authors fix the problems themselves.
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Bad editing is usually very heavy-handed editing. Instead of helping you find your best voice and ideas, a bad editor changes your writing into their own vision.
You may be dealing with a bad editor if they:
- Add material (examples, descriptions) that doesn't come from you
- Use a thesaurus to make your college essay sound "more mature"
- Add meaning or insight to the essay that doesn't come from you
- Tell you what to say and how to say it
- Write sentences, phrases, and paragraphs for you
- Change your voice in the essay so it no longer sounds like it was written by a teenager
Colleges can tell the difference between a 17-year-old's writing and a 50-year-old's writing. Not only that, they have access to your SAT or ACT Writing section, so they can compare your essay to something else you wrote. Writing that's a little more polished is great and expected. But a totally different voice and style will raise questions.
Where's the Line Between Helpful Editing and Unethical Over-Editing?
Sometimes it's hard to tell whether your college essay editor is doing the right thing. Here are some guidelines for staying on the ethical side of the line.
- An editor should say that the opening paragraph is kind of boring, and explain what exactly is making it drag. But it's overstepping for an editor to tell you exactly how to change it.
- An editor should point out where your prose is unclear or vague. But it's completely inappropriate for the editor to rewrite that section of your essay.
- An editor should let you know that a section is light on detail or description. But giving you similes and metaphors to beef up that description is a no-go.
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Proofreading (also called copy-editing) is checking for errors in the last draft of a written work. It happens at the end of the process and is meant as the final polishing touch. Proofreading is meticulous and detail-oriented, focusing on small corrections. It sands off all the surface rough spots that could alienate the reader.
Because proofreading is usually concerned with making fixes on the word or sentence level, this is the only process where someone else can actually add to or take away things from your essay . This is because what they are adding or taking away tends to be one or two misplaced letters.
Laser focus. Proofreading is all about the tiny details, so the ability to really concentrate on finding small slip-ups is a must.
Excellent grammar and spelling skills. Proofreaders need to dot every "i" and cross every "t." Good proofreaders should correct spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and grammar. They should put foreign words in italics and surround quotations with quotation marks. They should check that you used the correct college's name, and that you adhered to any formatting requirements (name and date at the top of the page, uniform font and size, uniform spacing).
Limited interference. A proofreader needs to make sure that you followed any word limits. But if cuts need to be made to shorten the essay, that's your job and not the proofreader's.
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A bad proofreader either tries to turn into an editor, or just lacks the skills and knowledge necessary to do the job.
Some signs that you're working with a bad proofreader are:
- If they suggest making major changes to the final draft of your essay. Proofreading happens when editing is already finished.
- If they aren't particularly good at spelling, or don't know grammar, or aren't detail-oriented enough to find someone else's small mistakes.
- If they start swapping out your words for fancier-sounding synonyms, or changing the voice and sound of your essay in other ways. A proofreader is there to check for errors, not to take the 17-year-old out of your writing.
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What Do Colleges Think of Your Getting Help With Your Essay?
Admissions officers agree: light editing and proofreading are good—even required ! But they also want to make sure you're the one doing the work on your essay. They want essays with stories, voice, and themes that come from you. They want to see work that reflects your actual writing ability, and that focuses on what you find important.
On the Importance of Editing
Get feedback. Have a fresh pair of eyes give you some feedback. Don't allow someone else to rewrite your essay, but do take advantage of others' edits and opinions when they seem helpful. ( Bates College )
Read your essay aloud to someone. Reading the essay out loud offers a chance to hear how your essay sounds outside your head. This exercise reveals flaws in the essay's flow, highlights grammatical errors and helps you ensure that you are communicating the exact message you intended. ( Dickinson College )
On the Value of Proofreading
Share your essays with at least one or two people who know you well—such as a parent, teacher, counselor, or friend—and ask for feedback. Remember that you ultimately have control over your essays, and your essays should retain your own voice, but others may be able to catch mistakes that you missed and help suggest areas to cut if you are over the word limit. ( Yale University )
Proofread and then ask someone else to proofread for you. Although we want substance, we also want to be able to see that you can write a paper for our professors and avoid careless mistakes that would drive them crazy. ( Oberlin College )
On Watching Out for Too Much Outside Influence
Limit the number of people who review your essay. Too much input usually means your voice is lost in the writing style. ( Carleton College )
Ask for input (but not too much). Your parents, friends, guidance counselors, coaches, and teachers are great people to bounce ideas off of for your essay. They know how unique and spectacular you are, and they can help you decide how to articulate it. Keep in mind, however, that a 45-year-old lawyer writes quite differently from an 18-year-old student, so if your dad ends up writing the bulk of your essay, we're probably going to notice. ( Vanderbilt University )
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Now let's talk about some potential people to approach for your college essay editing and proofreading needs. It's best to start close to home and slowly expand outward. Not only are your family and friends more invested in your success than strangers, but they also have a better handle on your interests and personality. This knowledge is key for judging whether your essay is expressing your true self.
Parents or Close Relatives
Your family may be full of potentially excellent editors! Parents are deeply committed to your well-being, and family members know you and your life well enough to offer details or incidents that can be included in your essay. On the other hand, the rewriting process necessarily involves criticism, which is sometimes hard to hear from someone very close to you.
A parent or close family member is a great choice for an editor if you can answer "yes" to the following questions. Is your parent or close relative a good writer or reader? Do you have a relationship where editing your essay won't create conflict? Are you able to constructively listen to criticism and suggestion from the parent?
One suggestion for defusing face-to-face discussions is to try working on the essay over email. Send your parent a draft, have them write you back some comments, and then you can pick which of their suggestions you want to use and which to discard.
Teachers or Tutors
A humanities teacher that you have a good relationship with is a great choice. I am purposefully saying humanities, and not just English, because teachers of Philosophy, History, Anthropology, and any other classes where you do a lot of writing, are all used to reviewing student work.
Moreover, any teacher or tutor that has been working with you for some time, knows you very well and can vet the essay to make sure it "sounds like you."
If your teacher or tutor has some experience with what college essays are supposed to be like, ask them to be your editor. If not, then ask whether they have time to proofread your final draft.
Guidance or College Counselor at Your School
The best thing about asking your counselor to edit your work is that this is their job. This means that they have a very good sense of what colleges are looking for in an application essay.
At the same time, school counselors tend to have relationships with admissions officers in many colleges, which again gives them insight into what works and which college is focused on what aspect of the application.
Unfortunately, in many schools the guidance counselor tends to be way overextended. If your ratio is 300 students to 1 college counselor, you're unlikely to get that person's undivided attention and focus. It is still useful to ask them for general advice about your potential topics, but don't expect them to be able to stay with your essay from first draft to final version.
Friends, Siblings, or Classmates
Although they most likely don't have much experience with what colleges are hoping to see, your peers are excellent sources for checking that your essay is you .
Friends and siblings are perfect for the read-aloud edit. Read your essay to them so they can listen for words and phrases that are stilted, pompous, or phrases that just don't sound like you.
You can even trade essays and give helpful advice on each other's work.
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If your editor hasn't worked with college admissions essays very much, no worries! Any astute and attentive reader can still greatly help with your process. But, as in all things, beginners do better with some preparation.
First, your editor should read our advice about how to write a college essay introduction , how to spot and fix a bad college essay , and get a sense of what other students have written by going through some admissions essays that worked .
Then, as they read your essay, they can work through the following series of questions that will help them to guide you.
Introduction Questions
- Is the first sentence a killer opening line? Why or why not?
- Does the introduction hook the reader? Does it have a colorful, detailed, and interesting narrative? Or does it propose a compelling or surprising idea?
- Can you feel the author's voice in the introduction, or is the tone dry, dull, or overly formal? Show the places where the voice comes through.
Essay Body Questions
- Does the essay have a through-line? Is it built around a central argument, thought, idea, or focus? Can you put this idea into your own words?
- How is the essay organized? By logical progression? Chronologically? Do you feel order when you read it, or are there moments where you are confused or lose the thread of the essay?
- Does the essay have both narratives about the author's life and explanations and insight into what these stories reveal about the author's character, personality, goals, or dreams? If not, which is missing?
- Does the essay flow? Are there smooth transitions/clever links between paragraphs? Between the narrative and moments of insight?
Reader Response Questions
- Does the writer's personality come through? Do we know what the speaker cares about? Do we get a sense of "who he or she is"?
- Where did you feel most connected to the essay? Which parts of the essay gave you a "you are there" sensation by invoking your senses? What moments could you picture in your head well?
- Where are the details and examples vague and not specific enough?
- Did you get an "a-ha!" feeling anywhere in the essay? Is there a moment of insight that connected all the dots for you? Is there a good reveal or "twist" anywhere in the essay?
- What are the strengths of this essay? What needs the most improvement?
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Should You Pay Money for Essay Editing?
One alternative to asking someone you know to help you with your college essay is the paid editor route. There are two different ways to pay for essay help: a private essay coach or a less personal editing service , like the many proliferating on the internet.
My advice is to think of these options as a last resort rather than your go-to first choice. I'll first go through the reasons why. Then, if you do decide to go with a paid editor, I'll help you decide between a coach and a service.
When to Consider a Paid Editor
In general, I think hiring someone to work on your essay makes a lot of sense if none of the people I discussed above are a possibility for you.
If you can't ask your parents. For example, if your parents aren't good writers, or if English isn't their first language. Or if you think getting your parents to help is going create unnecessary extra conflict in your relationship with them (applying to college is stressful as it is!)
If you can't ask your teacher or tutor. Maybe you don't have a trusted teacher or tutor that has time to look over your essay with focus. Or, for instance, your favorite humanities teacher has very limited experience with college essays and so won't know what admissions officers want to see.
If you can't ask your guidance counselor. This could be because your guidance counselor is way overwhelmed with other students.
If you can't share your essay with those who know you. It might be that your essay is on a very personal topic that you're unwilling to share with parents, teachers, or peers. Just make sure it doesn't fall into one of the bad-idea topics in our article on bad college essays .
If the cost isn't a consideration. Many of these services are quite expensive, and private coaches even more so. If you have finite resources, I'd say that hiring an SAT or ACT tutor (whether it's PrepScholar or someone else) is better way to spend your money . This is because there's no guarantee that a slightly better essay will sufficiently elevate the rest of your application, but a significantly higher SAT score will definitely raise your applicant profile much more.
Should You Hire an Essay Coach?
On the plus side, essay coaches have read dozens or even hundreds of college essays, so they have experience with the format. Also, because you'll be working closely with a specific person, it's more personal than sending your essay to a service, which will know even less about you.
But, on the minus side, you'll still be bouncing ideas off of someone who doesn't know that much about you . In general, if you can adequately get the help from someone you know, there is no advantage to paying someone to help you.
If you do decide to hire a coach, ask your school counselor, or older students that have used the service for recommendations. If you can't afford the coach's fees, ask whether they can work on a sliding scale —many do. And finally, beware those who guarantee admission to your school of choice—essay coaches don't have any special magic that can back up those promises.
Should You Send Your Essay to a Service?
On the plus side, essay editing services provide a similar product to essay coaches, and they cost significantly less . If you have some assurance that you'll be working with a good editor, the lack of face-to-face interaction won't prevent great results.
On the minus side, however, it can be difficult to gauge the quality of the service before working with them . If they are churning through many application essays without getting to know the students they are helping, you could end up with an over-edited essay that sounds just like everyone else's. In the worst case scenario, an unscrupulous service could send you back a plagiarized essay.
Getting recommendations from friends or a school counselor for reputable services is key to avoiding heavy-handed editing that writes essays for you or does too much to change your essay. Including a badly-edited essay like this in your application could cause problems if there are inconsistencies. For example, in interviews it might be clear you didn't write the essay, or the skill of the essay might not be reflected in your schoolwork and test scores.
Should You Buy an Essay Written by Someone Else?
Let me elaborate. There are super sketchy places on the internet where you can simply buy a pre-written essay. Don't do this!
For one thing, you'll be lying on an official, signed document. All college applications make you sign a statement saying something like this:
I certify that all information submitted in the admission process—including the application, the personal essay, any supplements, and any other supporting materials—is my own work, factually true, and honestly presented... I understand that I may be subject to a range of possible disciplinary actions, including admission revocation, expulsion, or revocation of course credit, grades, and degree, should the information I have certified be false. (From the Common Application )
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- You should get college essay help with both editing and proofreading
- A good editor will ask questions about your idea, logic, and structure, and will point out places where clarity is needed
- A good editor will absolutely not answer these questions, give you their own ideas, or write the essay or parts of the essay for you
- A good proofreader will find typos and check your formatting
- All of them agree that getting light editing and proofreading is necessary
- Parents, teachers, guidance or college counselor, and peers or siblings
- If you can't ask any of those, you can pay for college essay help, but watch out for services or coaches who over-edit you work
- Don't buy a pre-written essay! Colleges can tell, and it'll make your whole application sound false.
Ready to start working on your essay? Check out our explanation of the point of the personal essay and the role it plays on your applications and then explore our step-by-step guide to writing a great college essay .
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HSC: Choosing Your Subjects [A Guide]
Olivia Widjaja
Monday 7th, May 2018
This article is from the perspective of Olivia, a current Year 12 student and ATAR Notes contributor. Olivia runs a great studyblr Instagram account, which you can check out here .
Choosing your subjects for Years 11 and 12 can be quite difficult, considering how there are a large number of subject myths. On the other hand, some students may be interested in a large number of subjects but can’t narrow their selections down to 12 units. So how do you choose your subjects? The main tip in choosing subjects is to take note of:
What subjects you’re good at
What subjects interest you
These points are really important for helping you narrow down what subjects to choose. If you happen to be good at a subject, it can obviously help your ATAR since it can scale you up if you do really well in the HSC. Of course, you need to be interested in the subject as well – if you really enjoy a subject, you’re more determined to do well even if you don’t do as well or if you happen to not like the teacher.
Noting Strengths and Weaknesses
This is really important to take note of when going through your school Subject Handbook. If essay-writing happens to be your biggest weakness, then maybe humanities isn’t the way to go considering how all humanities subjects require you to write at least one essay. On the other hand, if you’re extremely passionate about the content but you still find essay-writing a weakness, you can improve throughout the two years. Essentially, no one really knows what they’re doing until Trials arrive, which is why you shouldn’t be too discouraged if teachers think you’re not capable of doing a subject.
However, you need to consider how dedicated you are in making sure you can improve. For example, if you think you can take on an Extension subject, be realistic with yourself and ask: How willing are you to spend more time studying for a specific subject? Are you capable of learning new concepts quickly? These are the kind of questions you should ask yourself because you need to make sure you’re willing to put in the effort. However, remember that you can drop a subject if you happen to not do well in the subject or if you found out you didn’t like the subject.
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I think this process is very important to determine what level of math you want to take. A lot of Year 10 students have asked me if they do 5.2 level of maths, can they do Extension Math? My answer: definitely. However, you need to be willing to work hard and keep up with the new content. A lot of students are shocked at the beginning of prelim year because they’re not used to the pace. However, if you enjoy maths, and you’re willing to work hard, then you are capable of taking any level of math. You just need to be realistic with yourself.
Math or No Math?
A lot of students go through this dilemma when choosing their subjects. Many think that you need to know what you want to do in university to help determine if you should take math or not. This is actually partially true. Unless you really know what you want to do in university or any form of tertiary education – maybe if you want to go into law or media studies – I would personally suggest taking a math subject; it doesn’t have to be Mathematics Extension 1 level, but even taking General Math (or I’ve heard they’ve changed the name to Standard Math) can be beneficial. This is because University of Sydney has become the first university to state that mathematics is becoming a prerequisite as of 2019 – of course, this is for selected subjects but if you look at the website, they’ve set out a table saying what courses have a mathematics prerequisite, including Combined Law degrees such as Commerce and Economics.
As for other universities, they haven’t implemented this prerequisite but keep an eye out just in case there are any changes in the future. If you happen to not take math but then you had a sudden career change, keep an eye out for some bridging courses. I’m not sure for other universities, but I do know Western Sydney University has a math course specifically for those who want to do Engineering but didn’t take math. So keep an eye out and do a bit of digging!
University Requirements: Prerequisites vs Assumed Knowledge
And thus, I segue into university requirements. When you flip through an undergraduate guide, you may notice a list of subjects that these universities have listed next to a degree. Note how it says assumed knowledge, which means you don’t have to take the subject they listed. It would be beneficial if you were to take the subject, but you shouldn’t force yourself just because the undergraduate guide listed it as assumed knowledge.
A good example of this is Extension Math for Engineering degrees. A lot of universities say that Extension Math is assumed knowledge, but that doesn’t mean they won’t accept you if you didn’t do Extension Math. Remember, universities also need to make money, and as cynical as it sounds, if a student is willing to pay for their fees, they’ll most likely accept you. There are stories of students who got into a course and their ATAR was slightly below the cut off. Will you struggle during university? I’ll be blunt, yes. But they’ll research everything to you during your first year. Following my Engineering example, a lot of people who did Mathematics struggled because they’re not used to the pace. However, it is still doable, which is why you should never choose a subject because it’s listed as assumed knowledge.
Prerequisites is a different story, and is something I touched on in the previous section.
Subject Myths
There will always be subject myths. There are so many rumours surrounding different subjects, such as “Society & Culture is really easy” or “Ancient History is just memorising key terms.” All these subjects have a level of difficulty. Plus, the level of difficulty differs from each person, so never follow any of these rumours.
Another issue I hear is subject hierarchy. You shouldn’t be pushing yourself to do a 3 Unit subject just so you can say “Oh I did Extension Math/ English.” You should be choosing the subject because you enjoy it. That being said, a lot of schools discourage doing Extension Math and Extension English. Initially, I didn’t understand this because I wanted to pick up both subjects. As a Year 12 student taking Extension Math, I can understand why. These subjects are quite heavy in their own respective ways.
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Extension Math is quite demanding with how many hours you spend doing homework and how long some of the working out is (especially geometric proofs). On the other hand, your writing skills for Extension English needs to be on point! I have many friends who take Extension English and they rant about doing more than three body paragraphs because you’re expected to write more in Extension English. Also, the texts you study are much harder. The first Year 11 Extension English task was an essay on T.S Eliot’s ‘The Waste Land’, which is approximately a twenty-page poem. You need to be prepared to spend a significant portion of your study time to take up a 3 Unit subject. You’re wasting your time if you’re only choosing an Extension subject just for the glory. Plus, no one’s going to care what subjects you did in the future so the glory of taking an Extension subject isn’t going to last as long.
STEM vs Humanities
STEM vs humanities is another debate I hear often. Personally, you shouldn’t be categorising these subjects based on if they’re STEM or humanities. As someone who does a mix of STEM and humanities, there is a benefit in taking a mix of subjects. You often hear people who do more humanities subjects say that it’s easier to take a bunch of subjects that lie in a similar field because there are overlaps. Although this is true, I like to think that taking a variety of subjects is great during my study sessions because what if I get sick of writing Modern History essays? I can put that aside and do some math, or vice versa. Plus, there are some small overlaps between the two areas.
For example, Extension Math and Modern History may sound like completely different subjects, but the essay structure in Modern History is actually quite strict; Susie – our amazing HSC History lecturer – described the structure to be almost formulaic. Although there is a high chance that Modern History students also take Extension English, the essay structure in English is extremely different to Modern History. Your thesis is a mix of your opinion and the rubric and your arguments are more thematic, whereas Modern History is extremely factual.
Pre-Subject Night
Before subject night arrives, make sure you have a good flip through your subject handbook. It should give you a guideline on the expectations of the subject – such as what skills are expected when taking the subject – and the list of topics and electives your school has selected. Prioritise what subject you’re interested in. Shortlist a bunch of subjects that you’re interested in. During my subject night, I was going to walk around the subjects with my friends but then I realised it wasn’t the best idea, so I decided to walk around on my own. Your shortlisted subjects shouldn’t be based on what your friends are interested in.
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By shortlisted, I don’t mean having a definite list of what subjects you know you will take. You might change your mind during the subject market. Just have at least ten subjects you know you have a level of interest and once you’ve gone through each subject. Plus, just by looking at the list of subjects, you may be able to easily rule out a specific department you know you’re not interested in. For example, a lot of my friends easily ruled out the LOTE department because they knew they weren’t interested in learning another language.
What to do during Subject Markets
Subject markets are a great opportunity for you to ask questions. This doesn’t mean asking the students if there are ‘bludge’ subjects. Ask questions such as how heavy the workload is or how content-heavy a subject is. Unless you have developed strong study habits, it’s great to take a mix of content-heavy and maths in this section. Science subjects, on the other hand, are a mix of content and practical so I’d say it’s beneficial picking up a science subject in conjunction with a math or humanities subject.
Another thing you should remember is to ask for a scope and sequence. It basically tells you want kind of topics they’ll go through during a certain time frame. This is more for the math subjects. Not only does it tell you what kind of content you’ll be going through, it will also tell you how fast they’ll be going through the content.
For the humanities subjects (and maybe science as well), you should also ask what kind of assessments they usually do. By this, I mean if there are going to be speeches, or hand-in assignments. It gives you a taste on what are the expectations when doing a subject, such as how much time you are expected to spend on this subject. For example, when I was volunteering for subject night, I went through all the types of assessments for Society & Culture for a Year 10 student. This actually helped her decide whether or not she wanted to do the subject because Society & Culture can be demanding, in the sense that you have to conduct primary research. To some, this may not be attractive, considering how you have to promote your primary research to gather some quality results. To others, assignments may be something they do better in rather than exams, which is why assessment format is another important factor to take note of when going through your subject list.
So here are a few tips on how to choose your subjects. Subject selection may take a while for you to decide, and sometimes you may not expect yourself to take a subject. For example, I never thought I would take Society & Culture but then at last minute, I ended up taking it. Also, remember that you can pick up and drop a subject. I’m not entirely sure if other schools do this, but during the first two weeks of Term 1, it was like a period of experimentation to see if you were interested in the subject. After those two weeks, you were able to pick up a different subject as long as they were able to fit the subject with your other subjects. Also, remember that you can always drop down to ten units at the end of Year 11, so don’t panic if you just discovered you disliked a subject half-way through Year 11.
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Part 5: How to Plan and Structure an Essay - Matrix Education. It is important to know how essays work if you want to write Band 6 responses. In this part of our guide, we explain how to plan and structure an essay. We also give you a variety of different structures that you can employ in your essays to ensure that you get the marks you need.
An essay is a structured piece of writing that argues a point in a clear, sophisticated way, and expresses personality and flair. Let's have a look at each of these keywords - and how they should inform our essay-writing process - in more detail. 3. "Arguing a point" means CAUSE and EFFECT. When most people study English, they tend to ...
Thesis: Your thesis statement, as outlined above. This is where you, immediately, put forward what you will be discussing in your essay. It may contain an opinion, it may not, but either way it is what you will be proving in your essay. This can be one or two sentences, depending on how complicated you want it to be.
We've also created 20 questions for you to choose from to write a Module B practice essay, which you can find here: 20 Practice Questions for HSC Standard English Module B: Close Study of Literature Part 5: The Guide to Module C: The Craft of Writing. The new HSC Standard English Module C is a frightening prospect for most students.
Improving your HSC English essay from the 17 range to the 19-20 range. English is one of those subjects that is mandatory for year 11 and year 12 students to undertake. However, it's not that hard of a subject to smash. In my first and second assignment, I was always getting 17/20 and the feedback I got to improve those marks, was minimal and ...
By laying the foundational content out all on one document, students are able to reduce stress around essay writing and set themselves up to best perform in the English exam room in those first 2 days of their exams. Check out this video from Head Performance Coach Jesse, HSC CoWorks Founder Fergus, and Education Performance Manager Donna on ...
Welcome to Essay Writing 101, brought to you by Anqi. This post on accurate writing marks the beginning to a series of short blog lessons specifically created to help Australian high school students in preparing for HSC English. However, it will be helpful for anyone looking to start English literary essay writing.
Years 10-12 study and essay skills. The smart way to prepare for your HSC. This two-day Essay Writing course focuses on the essay form and related critical thinking, language and punctuation skills for students in Years 10 - 12. The course is relevant to a range of subjects that require the writing of essays for assignments and exams.
Developing the skill of essay writing. Mar 2, 2021. Fergus Gardiner, Founder of HSC CoWorks + an English and Modern History Teacher, outlines the secret to writing a strong HSC Essay in this video and also highlights WHY essay writing is a critical skill for students to develop at school and take with them into the next stage of their life.
Good Luck. Overall, the HSC English Exam is one of the most stressful and unpredictable exams you will have to take. By being strategic in response to your questions, you will be organised, prepared and have limited anxiety as the exam approaches. With these tips, you will sharpen your analysis and writing skills, allowing you to ace your exam.
Collection of useful resources for HSC Students ... & I'm crying real tears so if you want study notes or past papers and explanations of how to write different types of essays check out. Divinia 2019 HSC Graduate. Absolute lifesaver, helped me so much because I was sort of expecting the questions and a lot of it was very similar. ...
Years 10-12 study and essay skills. The smart way to prepare for your HSC. This two-day Essay Writing course focuses on the essay form and related critical thinking, language and punctuation skills for students in Years 10 - 12. The course is relevant to a range of subjects that require the writing of essays for assignments and exams.
Why students struggle with essay writing. Effective essay writing has been on the decline for the past fifteen years in schools. Students struggle with their interpretation of questions, the harnessing of powerful evidence and structure and expression. As schools and teachers are increasingly time poor, essay writing is left until students have major assessment tasks and trial examinations ...
HSC CoWorks Founder Fergus has worked as a teacher across various schools in Sydney since 1984. In 1996, he founded the first HSC CoWorks campus in Bondi Junction, as well as the HSC CoWorks online portal which provides HSC students with a 'system' for writing essays and access to an expert essay marking service which allows students to practice their writing.
Composition writing is the process of creating written works such as essays, stories, and other types of texts. It requires the writer to organize their thoughts and ideas in a clear and coherent manner, and to express themselves using appropriate language and grammar. I have written all important compositions for all classes students including ...
The All-Rounder AceHSC. AceHSC has all the free resources and tools that you need to survive high school and its challenges.If you are new to our community, we strongly recommend you start from browsing our Study Resources site. We all know how important past exam questions and solid study notes are for exam success, so we collected a massive library of past works to help you ace your HSC journey.
Olivia is a current Year 12 student studying HSC Modern History. For everything Modern, check this out.HSC Modern History, just like any other Humanities subjec... Free Resources. Premium Resources. ... Essay-Writing. Essays are inevitable - you have three 25-mark essays, albeit your Personality essay is split up into a 10-mark and 15-mark ...
Keep in mind, however, that a 45-year-old lawyer writes quite differently from an 18-year-old student, so if your dad ends up writing the bulk of your essay, we're probably going to notice. (Vanderbilt University) So, basically, a big old thumbs up on the whole "get someone to look at your essay" situation, as far as colleges are concerned.
HSC: Choosing Your Subjects [A Guide] This article is from the perspective of Olivia, a current Year 12 student and ATAR Notes contributor. Olivia runs a great studyblr Instagram account, which you can check out here. Choosing your subjects for Years 11 and 12 can be quite difficult, considering how there are a large number of subject myths.
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